Reviews for The World's Form of Perfect

Reviews For: The World's Form of Perfect

won smrt cukE 2007-01-04 ch 1,	abuseWow, that blew me away! There are a few spelling errors, but other than that there is nothing wrong with this! But I just hope ya know, I don't look at the physical beauty, just the enternal beauty. Love, Ryann
Super Secret Squirrel 2006-01-20 ch 1,	abuseWow. That was beautiful and so true.Oh, and just to let you know I have heard of Casting Crowns. I even wrote a story with two of their songs in it.You should read it
ValkyrieRavenfeather 2005-10-13 ch 1,	abuseI thought it became somewhat weak towards the end. It looked like you were trying too hard to rhyme. Other than that, this was pretty good.
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-05-25 ch 1,	abuseI love the ending! so so much hope in those last few lines :) nice structure all the way through, x weasel within x hey, what IS perfect anyway!?
StradMore 2005-05-22 ch 1,	abuse"The world's form of perfectCannot hold me downNo one can see my beautyIf I wear a frown." Great lines. I totally agree with you about the imperfection-thingy. Some people just look at the outside not the inside. They judge you beforehand. The poem was very sad but inspiring. Keep it up.
Proud to be an American 2005-05-17 ch 1,	abusevery good poem!! looks definately don't matter!! ~Toni~
His Only 2005-05-03 ch 1,	abuseOH MY GOSH! I loved this! I so totally loved this! It is one of the truest things I have ever read!! The world is so judgmental and only care for those skinny tall blondes. Ugh! I loved how you incorperated Jesus into this. I agree with everything in this poem. It was SO SWEET! Aww!! I loved your rhyming words. It all worked together so well. And your last two lines were adorable! I am putting this on my favorites! It is just so... sweet and sad and true and... aww! Keep up the great work! It's so wonderful to find other Christian writers on here.
fake-smiles-n-masks 2005-05-03 ch 1,	abuseWow...that was beautiful! i could really feel your pain. I know its hard to do, but forget about what the world thinks. It only matters what God thinks and we all know that God loves us for who we are and it doesn't matter how much we weigh, how straight our hair is, or how many friends we have. All that matters is that we know that God loves us and will always be there for us. Thats what makes God so great! Great Job! Keep writitng!love muchsmilingface =)
Aryanda 2005-05-03 ch 1,	abuseOh wow. This was really good. Perfect is too hard to reach in this world. This was just really really great. Keep it up.

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