I can EASILY relate to this, its practically the same situation as it is for me and my friend, I think I just get jelous when I hear about them with someone else though...Back to the point, that was an awesome poem!

That was really nice. Perhaps because that actually happens in real life... Well yeah that was good.

i LOVE it! with or without editing, it's just great. It captures every emotion...the last line is magnificent, by the way!

Wow, without any editing? Its pretty good knowing that you didn't edit it. YOu could probably go back and fix a couple of stanza's, but it still is written very well.

-Apples

Love this poem, the ending is good, i loved the last line, i could just picture it in my mind...as if he smiled at you instead of her and you felt that for that second you were more than her...

I have to laugh to myself when I read a work like this that is said to be "a little rough". I've read finished works that were edited often that turned out a lot rougher than this. Great job. I've been there...

whoever this is about is so hurtful. This poem really makes me feel for you, and your love for this undeserving guy.

O, so endearing and saddening! I an feel that unending love and bitter dilemma. The last line really got to me, perfect.

this reminds me of how i was feeling a month or two ago, and still slightly to this day. you did a great job with this poem, keep it up!

ive been in taht situation & it sucks, but I liek this poem.. espcially he part that is italicized.. it works well with the poem

Ah! Excellent premise! I like! So sad. A lot of people feel this way, and you captured the emotion well.

I know the feeling - all too well I might add :( . Thx for the review.~Berzerk108

Oh! I really really loved this poem, it was so awesome. You have a beautiful way with words, and wish I knew the story behind this one! Good job.

Woah, i can totally relate to that. Good Job!

I really love this, captures the essence of being second best really well. Loved the last three lines.

Jizzle.