 Ethne Lovegood 2005-05-23 . chapter 1How dare you sneak a poem in without my knowing it! J/k I really liked it though, siple and flowing. I especialy like the way "wors flow from mind to hands" sounds. |
 randomunknown 2005-05-04 . chapter 1I think these 'time' poems are a little overdone, but this had an interesting quality and the last two lines are great so good job :) |
 youzi 2005-05-04 . chapter 1You're an 'awake-at-night" nocturnal one arent you. Nice work =D |
 Nothing is Trivial 2005-05-04 . chapter 1:) |
 pneumothorax 2005-05-04 . chapter 1Simply written but quite effective. |