its sad..i mean very emotionally sad..im sad for both of them..the logic of your story makes me want to hug you coz its true..anyway your summary is just awesome..

I think this is one of the saddest things I've ever read. Very, very good, but so sad. I was crying once I read the poem. You're an amazing writer.

aw. i love it. its so sad, but so beautiful. *muah* to an amazing author.

.tiar.

Dude... that's friggin' sad...

Really sad! You have every right to be proud of this. It's an amazing and powerful mix of pain and anger, forgiveness and guilt. Very wonderful story.

loved it! it was good. i really liked it