|Reviews for Injustice|
| OneLastEndeavor 5/4/05 . chapter 1
wow, i really like this! i love poetry dealing with this theme, the destruction of humanity. i once wrote a poem on this theme, too...anyway, good job!
| Lisa Parry 5/4/05 . chapter 1
Quite a political poem given the current issues. At first I was thinking of something like an Iraq situation, but as I read on I thought more of the third world.
The poem itself is effective in having a nameless narrator, who understood that their identity lay in numbers. WHat was unsual about the poem was the lack of anger, more a misunderstanding of the way order is in the world and the final point of how the strong prey on the weak gave the reader an important reminder to consider.