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| in theory 2005-08-17 ch 1,   | I loved how the first two stanzas/verses had the same rhythm and rhyming scheme & sound, it was like a magnetic force =p Thoroughly enjoyed this, it reeks of professionalism. |
| Moonjava 2005-08-03 ch 1, | This is so enriching and I love the flow in this one. |
| catseyeview 2005-06-16 ch 1, | The Crocodile Tears - the title is so catching, as you are reading it gives you a picture an image that is so very vivid. |
| youzi 2005-05-17 ch 1, | The rhyme helped it to flow really well. Keep writing =D |
| The tribes tale 2005-05-11 ch 1, | WOw , this poems awesome! |
| GirlNamedLiv 2005-05-08 ch 1, | i like the ending. good job |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-05-06 ch 1, | Wow, I think that this is one of the best you have ever done. Its very honest with a range of emotions that are almost bittersweet. I love this poem and the way it flows. I love the 2nd and 3rd stanzas the most for some reason. Keep it up. |
| lettersxtoyoux3 2005-05-06 ch 1, | i love that. keep up the good work. the ending was awesome. if you go to my page and read some of the older ones (with the cutting themes...) i think you might be able to relate a little. tell me what you think. |
| Devil6667 2005-05-06 ch 1, | i know how you feel... i like it... and i've been through this before... excellent poem |
| hellokittychic31 2005-05-05 ch 1, | great job on the rhyming...very sweet! mucHLUB-kerr |
| incandescent.smiles 2005-05-05 ch 1, | I like this (of course). Sounds like something I might imagine... a scene with my and one of my friends...yep. anywho, it flowed well and the concept is easy to understand. ~leila* |
| Anthony 2005-05-05 ch 1, | Beautiful, just beautiful. i loved it, loads f emotion and I think its one of ur best works so far. |
| underminingfaith 2005-05-05 ch 1, | I can relate to this... times when you really want it to work but it just gets worse. |
| Rosanna28 2005-05-04 ch 1, | Awwh Alex...I'm so sorry you're going through this... This was beautiful but really really sad and it really made me cry. You can always talk to me, you know that right?! I'm always here for you. Much love, your friend. |
| putz-6 2005-05-04 ch 1, | this is a great poem ^_^ |