I feel powerful emotions from this poem, the repetition of "not anymore"... I am sad to see the way you feel about life. It seems a shame to feel depressed when you seem to have so much to feel happy about.

beautiful. I love how this was written. Great work! I love the use of the words and it's very touching.

Sorrow

The power in this, the universal feel to it is numbing. Well done!

!* Noelle *!

wow.. very powerful

This is really beautiful. Love the italics. I can really relate. Excellent job! QueenVixta x

i like it...reminds me that im not the only one who's life sucks and it also reminds me of life of agony...a very good band...

thats SO emotional bring in some more!