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| Needa S 2005-08-04 ch 1, | abuseOne word... Excellent! Keep on writing ya are very talented. God Bless ya! Needa S. |
| Arrow's Flight 2005-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI REALLY like this poem. The repetition of Gone puts the reader right there. Favorite Line: Gone from thought, Gone from memory, Gone from the world… KEEP WRITING. -Arrow's Flight- |
| Bookworm12-8-90 2005-05-09 ch 1, | abuseso pretty!! i like! and you update either really slow or really fast... O_o |
| aeolyn 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI liked the ways you compared the stain-glass window to life. Interesting. "To display it’s meaning./But it is gone in a split second" Loved that line. |