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Reviews For: Stainedglass window

Needa S
2005-08-04
ch 1,
abuseOne word... Excellent! Keep on writing ya are very talented. God Bless ya!

Needa S.
Arrow's Flight
2005-05-14
ch 1,
abuseI REALLY like this poem. The repetition of Gone puts the reader right there.

Favorite Line: Gone from thought,

Gone from memory,

Gone from the world…

KEEP WRITING.

-Arrow's Flight-
Bookworm12-8-90
2005-05-09
ch 1,
abuseso pretty!! i like! and you update either really slow or really fast... O_o
aeolyn
2005-05-04
ch 1,
abuseI liked the ways you compared the stain-glass window to life. Interesting. "To display it’s meaning./But it is gone in a split second" Loved that line.
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