Very criptic, a little lusty (maybe that's just my dirty mind playing tricks) but overall I really liked it. Just the way that it moves along. And the way it could have about twenty different meanings to different people. It's awesome.

"Something that feels so goodCould not possibly be sin…." I loved this line. And yes, you've posted again! You're a great writer and this is no exception, I loved all the words you used and how you put the feeling across. Keep writing,~Allie

interesting i have really no idea if u mean chocolate, or something else altogether, nice poem

Good description. "Something that feels so goodCould not possibly be sin…." is a BRILLIANT line =P good job.

~LP~