A bit better, but it ended to quickly. And the Cthulhu thing kept me from taking the end seriously.

I'd like to see this updated again sometime.

Again, cool, but the action wasn't as much as I hoped it would be.

Le gasp! Tyrannical Jews? Unthinkable! Don't you know it's anti-Semitic to question anything Israel does?

But seriously, I liked your story and the setting looks cool. Still, I think you got away from the action too much.

War is awful and senseless. Will the Human species ever learn that?

This is a good chapter that shows what war can relly do to people.

Sounds interesting.

Ye, the Silent Explosive Projectile gun is related to things we discussed.