Hey, that’s quite a cliffhanger you got us there!

Hm, parang rushed po ata ang pagkakasulat ng chapter na ito. I suggest you edit it for some typos, subject-verb agreement, and consistency of tenses.

Plot-wise, the story retains its grip—and with that cliffhanger you left me to hang on, i definitely can’t wait to read what happens next. ^__^

wow. this is just the type of story that will get you in a lot of trouble when published widely. pretty wicked. dark. real at some point, yes. it attacks the church, though. nyahah! and i like it. *rui gets struck by lightning*

i wonder though, if it's the year 30, aren't people at that time smart enough to know better than follow some retarded pope's barbaric orders? i mean only mindless, spineless freaks would go around and throw stones at women, or throw kids into the lions or crucify men, even. then again, judging by how men adore and worship the pope...hm. pretty interesting concept.

the images you have built into this story are really scary. i hope this gets updated soon, though. ha, i can never get enough *earth opens up and gobbles rui whole*

The saddest part about this story is that this story makes me believe that it could actually happen. You really weren't kidding when you put 'Horror' in the genres, were you?

Please, WRITE MORE! I love this story. *adds to fav. story list.

Very interesting. Nice one. Can't wait to read more from you.