Reviews for Dark Triumphs I: Life in Space

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Ruri Star Sykel 2007-05-09 ch 21,	Hey i liked that story i read it all in one day... Wow...amazing i really did. Anyways is there another one? let me know, kay?
Switch 2007-03-08 ch 21,	It was a good story. Fairly well written. It moved pretty fast though, and you might want to to consolidate it, make longer/fewer chapters. And Slow it down a bit, develop the characters a bit more, make more things happen to them to strengthen their relationship. I have this problem in one of my stories... Anyway, yeah, nice job. ^_^
Lady Psychic 2007-03-05 ch 21,	This is an interesting story full of twists and turns. I liked most of the characters (although I was shocked when Dan turned out to be a bad guy). Anyways, keep up the good work!
Silver Daratraz 2005-06-21 ch 21,	i still think i like End better, i'm attached to dragons...anything dragon's my favorite instantly. little tyke that he is.
Silver Daratraz 2005-06-21 ch 14,	WHAT THE HELL! i knew Dan had somethin to do with that 'bad'mysterious figure, but Dan dead? what the hell! what's happenin?
Silver Daratraz 2005-06-21 ch 8,	Laughs- you evil little dragon...chuckles ...You're having fun with End...
Silver Daratraz 2005-06-21 ch 5,	trying not to laugh I like your off comments...gives up ...hahahahahah...
Gaki Toki 2005-06-02 ch 21,	Endy Endy, such language...And I thought Ren was the only one who swore that violently...Jesus...Anyways, I'm preoccupied and I selfish, sadistic ** today so screw it, this is my really short review alright?
Gaki Toki 2005-06-02 ch 19,	Hmm, chapter nineteen, I was hoping for some yaoiness, but oh well...later I hope...
Kungfuchicken 2005-06-02 ch 21,	Lots of fun! I thought it was the coolest, and I can't wait to see the rest of it. Expecally the musings of End, Al, Zargoff an ye.
Gaki Toki 2005-05-30 ch 18,	Now, normal people eat...EACH OTHER! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Kung Fu Chicken 2005-05-29 ch 16,	Because the're packin' guns thats why. If you catch my drift. :p Nah, they prolly just have really bad luck. Or something like that.
Gaki Toki 2005-05-29 ch 16,	Jason: I think Al gets caught because he hates birds. Ren: Oh get a life Jason, he does not! He gets caught because he's gay. See, anybody knows when gay men are around, there's just this amazing aura that radiates from them...it's just so perfect...sigh I could just that little bastard ALL day... Jason: Who? I'm so lost... Thad: Me, he could ME all day. He's sick that one...Jesus Christ...I need to stay AWAY from him. Jack and I are going on a vacation to Florida, and on the way there we're stoppin' by North Carolina to visit Ren's mom. We're gonna tell her how much of a ** her son's grown up to be...not to mention how perverted he is. Ren: NO YOU'RE NOT! Thad: Oh yes we are...heh, heh... Jason: Oh, I wish I could come with you, but I have to keep Gaki company before she moves. She has this shield set up and when it falls I gotta be there. See, when it goes down she's either gonna kill somebody (probably her boyfriend) or she's just gonna start ballin' and either way I gotta be there to comfort her...and/or get her out of prison...ah well, GAKI, HERE I COME TO SAVE YOU!
Gaki Toki 2005-05-29 ch 15,	Ren: Chains? No! Thaddy come back to me with your whipped creme and melted candle wax! Hey, if Dan's dead...couldn't someone still do him? They'd just never hear the end of it from me...NECROMANCERS! HAHAHAHAHA! WHO THE ** DID IT?! Okay Ren, shut-up, you're scaring lots of people. Besides, did I give you permission to swear in my reviews? HUH?! Ren: whimpers I'm sorry Gaki, I'm just so syked about going to see Star Wars and all. You know? Gaki: Yes I know...alrighty, well, Jason will have to wait 'til later to eat your brains. No...I think he'd rather tear off your balls and staple them to your forehead. Ren: O.O; Jason: growls
Gaki Toki 2005-05-29 ch 14,	Jason: faints Sorry, he's not a ** fan, but I AM! in oddly happy sing-song voice It's a scene, it's a scene, I'M SO HAPPY! But Jason is still chained down to the floor, Ren still has a black eye (probably because Jason is 31 and Ren is 22 and Jason is ultimately stronger), but anyways...Um...Thad is still...um...where IS Thad? looks around for Thad I guess I lost him...maybe he's off having sex with Birdie (Jack). Okies...um...Ren, why are you sniffing my *? Ren: You smell different... You do this often? Ren: ...^_^;...heh, heh...runs away*

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