a very funny beginning...and a touching ending. You have outdone yourself once again. Great work!

Sorrow

aww thats so sad, ive always thought of wriitng a story from a pets perspective but have never managed it so hats off to you! the ending's reallysad, and you've made it sad by giving so much emotion in this and building up a great picture so well done! if you like, check out my short story Through My Window, x weasel within x

Very nice! This is actually sort of sad...but still, it's good all the same. Good work!