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Reviews For: The Last Battle
Selrahc Nosnehpets 2005-05-06 . chapter 1
This was a damn good story. I really like the end paragraph about the drop of blood. If there was one criticism I could make though it would be the lack of description of the characters. We never know what the dragon looks like and the warrior she fights is not described enough. But apart from those little points absolutely fantastic story.
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