You are the best writer I have found on FictionPress so far, everything of yours that I have read I have loved even though a lot of it is romance and I hate romance. Get this story published!

One thing though: you rated this K+ which doesn't seem right at all, I would rate it T if I were you.

-Xenophiliac

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

"..."

Good. Grief.

I read this entire story in the course of the past 2 days and I don't think I've ever gotten so involved and put so much emotion with the characters.

Even though sometimes I did get a tad lost the entire thing was very well done. I would hope that's not the end! You can't just leave Joey slamming Samantha into a wall!

And why oh why did Cleo have to die? She had such a beautiful heart and soul.

*sigh* well, the show must go on.

hi!! sorry i haven't been reviewing lately ^_^; i've been busy with summer homework and stuff (and trying to write Vampires... i looked at it the day before yesterday, wrote a paragraph, promised myself i'd write more tomorrow/yesterday and i haven't touched it since... hmm... maybe i should go and do some now...)anyway!! aww i like "Joey", i know i've heard it before but i just really noticed how cute it is! but steve... >_< he wont die, right? i dont want anyone to die... *cries* dont let anyone die! *but it's too late now, you've already written it...*

D=

That was shocking.And incredibly sad.And oh my god.D=

Wow that brought pure heart-pounding "oh my god, what's she going to do to his ass?" excitement!

Oh, I love this story haha.

From chapter 2:"He had a temper. Wow, did he ever have a temper! His temper had gotten him in trouble before, even with the law. He was extremely possessive and extremely jealous; not a good match at all for someone like Samantha Wilson. Oh, no, definitely not. It just screamed trouble.

And Joe Riece was right in the middle of it."

Wow that was a long time ago!And WHAT WHAT WHAT- You stopped uploading!

What happens next!? GAH!

“Then you should go to his house,” she said immediately, surely.

It seems clear that Cleo actually has more faith in Mortality than she is letting Joe see.

Sorry it took me so long to return to this!

This chapter is intriguing. Reading on to chapter 18!

aw no! nobodys gonna die are they? btw i just though... are you reweriting this now? ^_^; wow...but if you are - omg i can NEVER catch up to you! its amazing already and if you're making it even better... *cries* just send it for publishing when you're finished, okay? do it!

*cries* that was... beautiful!! at first i was really sad, when joe was telling everyone, because anna was all hurt and it was sad... but then it got onto the real cleo/joe scene, and all i felt was love! so much emotion - i can tell you put your whole heart into this, just by reading it you can feel the emotion and the love in the story...dont change it, okay? :P seriously - no more rewriting, or i'll hire a hitman to deal with you...

hahaha!! sorry ive not reviewed in a while - i could've sworn i read the fic as soon as i got the last update email... but i was on fp.net checking my review history so i could search for something else, and noticed this fic had been updated. so i guess fp.net never sent the update mails... ^_^; i've missed about 5, right? sorry... you should've said

aw cute scene!! it's all coming back to me now haha, but that line about fate... reminded me of my story with fate ^_^; i really should write that

anyway, aww i feel so sorry for anna though! will things be okay with her? btw, does cleo die...? how? *reads on*

Yes, I can understand how you can love this story so much. Beautiful wording, and real characters with real problems. =) I'm really loving Joey right now -- he's really 3D.

Onto the next chapter...

This chapter is interesting. Both Anna's and Steve's reactions were a lot like mine. Does that say something about ME!? Haha. It was fun to read, written well, & told us more about their relationship. But it was also...

Weird.

Still weird. And I have to agree with Anna. And Steve. Joey seems nuts. Crazy!! What is he DOING!? Haha sorry. I'm the kind of person that reads things online and screams at the computer when I get really involved with a story. =).

I like it. I like it. I LIKE it! =D

So far so good... I'm enjoying the reading. I just wonder if Cleo is actually a good person... or what... :)