Hey, I'm the sixth reviewer and I can't wait until you update! ^.^ I like Cal already, I think it's because he sounds like a loner. ^.~ Update soon!

this makes me the fifth review. so go update. lol. luv the start, cant wait to see what you do w/it. didnt really see any problems w/what you have now, except...curse your family. its not fair to have so many good writers who are so young. still luv all of your guys stuff though. update soon! ~Sage

nice story! update soon... btw, the preview for chap 2 is exciting... UPDATE!

::stares blankly at screen:: Awesome job, Kate. =} There were some minor rammatical errors, probably because you don't have spell checker, but I'll email it to you later, since I'm lazy right now. heh. o.O? I didn't know you knew French, ah that's cool. "Mr. Tan's Chinese Food and Donuts" haha, for some odd reason I find that to be VERY funny. Anyways, the plot seems like fun, I haven't seen anyone else do it, then again I don't read much... lol. CONTINUE OR SUFFER MY WRATH! ^.~

Definately got me hooked. I hope you continue this. It has the potential to get interesting.

:D hiya, cuz!! WOO! gud start, u must continue asap! i lik da preview o CH 2, sounds lik fun XD glad 2 hav u on da site! Anothr cuz turnd 2 da drk side, hehe, luv ya!! ;)

Random shout: Noah is a manwhore!! ^__^;