O...Wow! I really loved it, had me wondering for a while. Keep it up!

I loved this...it is so good, wow, i really realy like this. So many speculations and not knowing the answer. It leaves the reader wondering, it is all so so good. ^-^ Keep it up.

like motch says, it's so...you.

it's sad; has that tangible feeling of longing. at the same time, it's hopeful, with all that talk of maybe's.

great work, as always. ^_^

oh, and he'll find you. sooner or later. ^__^

cool story. pls tell me why u were sayin "are u sure ur thirteen?" pls tell me why! lol...update more

wow...this was wonderful! u have a great talent!