That's such a beautiful piece of writing, so sad and so serious. Good job.

kerazy but i loved this. its sad how many teenagers get drunk and do stupid things while theyre intoxicated which may ultimately lead to someones death. i havent lost anyone (thankfully) to drinking but i have a couple of friends that have and its a harrowing ordeal. i wouldnt wish it on anyway. i love the way this chapter is woven together and the fact that its very reaalistic in the sense that, things like these DO happen. its also sad (not in the gay way, but the feeling.) -sticks author in favies-. i shall return to read your other stories.

come and read mine when you can.

LuVies,

SPam

This one had me bawling for sure. Your story has a great moral to it.

I'm crying.

That was amazing. Keep writing

wow. that extremely moved me. i almost cried at the end, it was soo good. i really liked this story. it was one of the best one-shots i've ever read. u have some serious talent. ciao.

Good...but who were Jamie and Laura? How were they linked to the girl?

I noticed one problem where it said, "They were badly injured, but they survived. The people in the other car were a couple. She’s in intensive care, but he’s all right. Their daughter was in the backseat. She didn’t survive." I think the She's in intensive care should be They're. But other than that it's good. i like the message it delivered and all the little stories. Nice job.

happy hunting, ~Midnight Predator~