freaky!

Yes! Make another chapter!

This is different. It is refreshing to see a romance from a killers point of view. I want to read more. One suggestion- "I'm not obsessed with you I just love every little thing about you" might be better if you split it into two sentences. "I'm not obsessed with you. I just love every little thing about you." It is fine the way it is and is not a error on your part. But I personally wanted to pause after the first bit. So it's more of a personal thing than a critique and you should keep whatever sounds better. Ok, aside from my little wierd opinion this is something worth developing further and I really hope you continue. Luv Kaitx

weird but good..please do continue!