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Reviews For: children I wish to gather as bouquets in my arms

Sophie Ulquiorra Allen
2005-11-17
ch 1,
abuseWeird, but inventive. Never thought about menstruation that way myself, but am open to opinion.
CovinS
2005-07-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is bizarre and crude, and simply cringe-inducing literature.

I like it.
not sure yet
2005-06-12
ch 1,
abusevery crude, but i love it, and strangely enough, ive had moments like this, messy and odd and morbid, but still oddly loving, i dont know, muchly enjoyed this, excellent job
Rebekah the Scribe
2005-05-29
ch 1,
abuseOkay, in a way, this is a bit gross...and yet it is very much a lament for everything (or child, in this case) that might-have-been. And being female myself, I have to say it made me think differently about my own menstruation, which was kind of weird to tell you the truth...

One thing though, the part where the speaker is talking of being pregnant and all that. It's kind of rambling and long, and jumbled together. But it kind of works so I guess it isn't too bad. ^_^

Nice job. And I thank you belated-ly for the review you left on my poem "Death Throes of the World". I really appreciated it.

~CR
DOORphrame
2005-05-06
ch 1,
abuseWow. This is weird. Very nice though.
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