submit this. yes, again some people will think against it. but it's worth trying to get out there.

me gusta mucho!

This is excellent...I think it would make a good song, with the "MARCH, MARCH" section being a sort of shouted chorus...

this is really good, but im republican and i like george w. bush so its hard to relate to...nice job tho

InFuckingCredible, one of the best things i have read for a long time. I agree with your point of view, especially the "as we spread our democracy" part.

wow, fantastic poem! really some great emotions and the repitition lends alot to it. i could do with less swearing, lol, but whatever floats your boat. kudos and, I AM CANADIAN. lol, good luck in America, seems like your gonna need it.

Very cutting and daring to post this. Has a ring of truth