umm kinda creepy. she chose very quickly about the deaths...anyway still good.~Sara

That almost made me cry.

Ooh, the plot thickens!I just thought I'd take this opportunity to inform you of how much I am enjoying this story. Rock on and ciao,...me.

The 1 chapter was really really great. Love the way it shots of the story. Your reader kind of gets an idea of what is coming, when you mention Job... but just a hint. Like chapter 2 too. However, the last part with Lily praying and the voice of "Satan" running side by side, I not a big fan of that. But on a whole I really like it and hope to see an up-date soon. =)

Interesting... very interesting... I must say I'm very intrigued by this. It's too short to really tell anything about your style and stuff but I'll definately keep a look out for more stuff.