Reviews for Breathing Steam in May

kristhegreat 2005-05-24 ch 1,	abuseWhoa... I like it! It's very short and sweet, but powerful at the same time, and it's hard to come across good short poems... but you've pulled it off! Awesome! :D ~Kris
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-05-09 ch 1,	abuseintersting how at first the night kinda symbolises the future and how uncertain it is but then you call it "sweet night" kinda showing how you've accepted how you have to move on, thats what i got out of this anyway, i like this, thanks for all the reviews, hope to get your opinion on my other poems sometime too, x weasel within x
Relayer 2005-05-07 ch 1,	abuseIntriguing, conveys a sense of loneliness to me. Nice work
indigotear-to lazy to sign ... 2005-05-07 ch 1, anon.	abusehum, interesting. keep posting, i missed u!
simpleplan13 2005-05-07 ch 1,	abuselove the ending