| Reviews for Breathing Steam in May |
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kristhegreat 5/24/05 . chapter 1Whoa... I like it! It's very short and sweet, but powerful at the same time, and it's hard to come across good short poems... but you've pulled it off! Awesome! :D Kris |
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 5/9/05 . chapter 1intersting how at first the night kinda symbolises the future and how uncertain it is but then you call it "sweet night" kinda showing how you've accepted how you have to move on, thats what i got out of this anyway, i like this, thanks for all the reviews, hope to get your opinion on my other poems sometime too, x weasel within x |
Relayer 5/7/05 . chapter 1Intriguing, conveys a sense of loneliness to me. Nice work |
indigotear-to lazy to sign in 5/7/05 . chapter 1 hum, interesting. keep posting, i missed u! |
simpleplan13 5/7/05 . chapter 1love the ending |