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| sorryshestolemystuff 2005-08-28 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it and I disagree with whoever said it just halts at the end. The words used paint great pictures in the reader's mind. True, the flow seems a bit awkward, but it's never too terribily great in any short poem excepting sonnets. (Even then...) ^^b Thumbs up! |
| Cookie Gestapo 2005-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI can't decide if it's beautiful or ...I dunno just something else. |
| Archipelago 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abuseHello, the poem is o.k. it hass its flaws but all in all it works well enough though the part about hell could use some work, it just doesn't flow but seems to cut to a halt. But it really isn't that bad. So good job. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI assure that the imagery is beautiful. |