Holy **. I loved it XD

Well written, well portrayed. ^_^ It totally had me going there. and the ending was awesome! XD

wow, how surreal 0_o I'd be like 'okay, who's been putting the LSD in my coffee? Please stop, okay? Kthnx!'

Seriously though, it's really interesting - fading in from one world into the next. It's real, and then it isn't. It's a chinese food restaurant, his partner has no idea what's freaking him out... and then he's in the paper. What a confusing turn of events... ^^ At least nothing seems to have happened to his nice car!

I loved it...kind of a cool twist-y ending.

lol. this amused me.

This was one strange story. I know it's a one shot but would you please consider expanding it? I'd really like to know whats going on.

That was awesome. :]

twisted, twisted, twisted! oh god, did i enjoy this. i've never read anything that made me question my own sanity quite like this. wow...excellant!