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| InsanoFreakChild 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseHoly **. I loved it XD Well written, well portrayed. ^_^ It totally had me going there. and the ending was awesome! XD |
| S.Tori 2006-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, how surreal 0_o I'd be like 'okay, who's been putting the LSD in my coffee? Please stop, okay? Kthnx!' Seriously though, it's really interesting - fading in from one world into the next. It's real, and then it isn't. It's a chinese food restaurant, his partner has no idea what's freaking him out... and then he's in the paper. What a confusing turn of events... ^^ At least nothing seems to have happened to his nice car! |
| versechorusverse 2005-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI loved it...kind of a cool twist-y ending. |
| Damian E L 2005-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuselol. this amused me. |
| LadyFalcone 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was one strange story. I know it's a one shot but would you please consider expanding it? I'd really like to know whats going on. |
| theoryoferin 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome. :] |
| xanthofile 2005-05-07 ch 1, | abusetwisted, twisted, twisted! oh god, did i enjoy this. i've never read anything that made me question my own sanity quite like this. wow...excellant! |