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Arcane D. 2005-05-09 . chapter 1
form, flow and use of words here are decent if not a little lacking. The first two stanzas were excellent but you lost me on the third one. Maybe, I was wrong when judging you... You need to keep working at writing poetry. -ADD
simpleplan13 2005-05-08 . chapter 1
interesting.. i liek the whole childhood reference
poetic abortion 2005-05-07 . chapter 1
I believe it was BLIND that was your 100th post? ._. CONGRAGUALATIONS~! :D Sorry for being rather slow on that. ^^; *hugs* :-D I really like it actually, the poem had a great flow to it, though there were a bit of a snag or two but nothing really bad. I love the word use and I really like how I could relate to a few lines in this, though not fully. Lovely work as always! ^-^

!~* Noelle *~!
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