FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Wizard of Souls 2007-11-23 ch 5,  | abuseThis is why I love randomly going through other people's favorites: You find just one story that jumps out and craves to be read. This was that one story and it was absolutely stunning. I loved the way you wrote it, the way the characters seemed so much more real than most other stories I've read here. I just know a story was written right when I empathize with all of the characters on a core level. This is by far one of the best stories I've ever had the luck to read here on FP. ~WoS |
| metaphorixx 2007-03-24 ch 5, | abuseThat story depressed the ** out of me. Wow. |
| dolly-dear 2006-12-25 ch 5, | abuseI love it. Totally awesome. |
| Kizuna 2006-11-19 ch 5, | abuseOh my God!! This was so good!! And so sad...!! I just have to put this story on my fav list!!^__^ And you too, because this was just awesome!^__~ *Kizuna* |
| . 2006-09-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseW0W |
| sillygoose 2006-03-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow.. That's really all I have to say.. *_* .. Wow. |
| sillygoose 2006-03-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseHello! Just browsing around on lj, and I decided to go to your FictionPress and look around too! This summary seemed so sad.. and it just enticed me to read the story u__u.. the prologue was very sad as well.. |
| ddz008 2005-12-11 ch 5, | abuseI liked it... it was sad, but a great story at the same time. I began reading it months ago, but I enter a time of depression in my life and the story was too much for me. Now that I read it, I liked it and I hope you keep writing such wonderful things in the future. |
| Chris-no-Baka 2005-11-20 ch 1, | abusei really don't know why i like reading these stories so much, there so depressing. lol but anyway, i lied this one. it was a new twist on the usual suicide fic. good work |
| Darwin 2005-11-20 ch 5, anon. | abuseThis is one of the most incredibly moving stories I've ever read. Part of that's because it isn't the traditional, emotional rollercoaster type story that normally has me in tears over the poor characters; it's got a kind of inevitability to it, that makes it almost serene in its sadness. You know what's going to happen, right from the beginning, and you know that there's no other possible outcome, but you can't help not being almost in tears by the conclusion. And the last line is sheer brilliance: "softly, solemnly, but with a certain sense of serenity" is exactly how I would sum up the way you've written the story. I also find it nice that you haven't broken Darren: you can picture him grieving for a while - a very long while, actually - but moving on and continuing his life and making something of himself, so this relationship is an important part of his past, but doesn't define him. |
| doragon41 2005-10-25 ch 5, | abusesad but absolutely beautiful...it made me cry...and i love it |
| Sarah 2005-09-05 ch 5, anon. | abuseI dont know how to describe what this story made me feel but its amazing, so different from anything ive read before! I love it even though it made me sad it also made me think and appreciate love and life! Im not good with words but thankyou! |
| The Great M 2005-09-03 ch 5, | abusei cry like a baby after i read your storys most of the time yet i can't stop...it's making me sad how i can't stop reading them |
| Tom 2005-09-03 ch 5, anon. | abusegood story. |
| Tom 2005-09-03 ch 1, anon. | abusewah! Just wah! Oh its so sad! I don't usually read things this morbid but its really well done! |