 simpleplan13 2006-05-13 . chapter 5creppy |
 simpleplan13 2005-11-22 . chapter 4o creepy and well done |
 megan lebrashka 2005-07-29 . chapter 1 yeah not bad. |
 Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-06-12 . chapter 1O actually this was very interesting...comparing it to a kettle as it explodes. Oddly enough it reminded me of the witches in Macbeth, the cauldron overflowing with bubbles of deceit and hatred. Bravo to you. |
 Moonbeam Elegance 2005-05-23 . chapter 1those words just sound so cool-one of my faves 2 date.
my poem Hallucinations:every1 is going oh yeh this poem sybolises a lot and im going uh...does it? the blue rose is just a hallucination in other words someone is seeing it and it isnt really there
Moonbeam E |
 Cloud Burst 2005-05-22 . chapter 1great vocab! detritus... awesome work! |
 simpleplan13 2005-05-08 . chapter 1nice |
 randomunknown 2005-05-08 . chapter 1I like this, great choice of words. |