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| tomato-greens 2005-08-23 ch 1,   | Happy nondenominational holiday to you, too. I am so bad at reviews that it's amusing. Nevertheless; I like the characters. I particularly like the way Adelaide treats Krayon, because this love-hate-n-exasperation is absolutely the best basis for any relationship. Of course it is, what are you talking about? Anyway. Ignoring the internal-turned-external monologue, I like the ending very much. It lets it down nice and gently. |