|Reviews for The Avenger|
| Smoky Bear 11/9/05 . chapter 1
i like the way this starts off with a fast, up-beat tempo and then slows down as the poem unfolds.
my only beef is the word "seeked" it should be "sought" - forgive me for being pedantic, your work is too sweet for ppl to pick at little errors.
I really like your choice of themes and subject matter, not just in this poem but consistently throughout all your poems I have read.
Cool poem-Avenge on!
| ShadowPharoh 5/8/05 . chapter 1
very cool. your style is fantastic. i mean, wow.