i like the way this starts off with a fast, up-beat tempo and then slows down as the poem unfolds.

my only beef is the word "seeked" it should be "sought" - forgive me for being pedantic, your work is too sweet for ppl to pick at little errors.

I really like your choice of themes and subject matter, not just in this poem but consistently throughout all your poems I have read.

Cool poem-Avenge on!

very cool. your style is fantastic. i mean, wow.

SP