I love the images you portrayed in this. The verbs are strong, and that helps in the visualizations. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

entertaining, i like it, reminds me of those pictures of the sun and moon with the faces on them..the oriental ish kind of ones if you know what i mean, anywayz, muchly nice

I like how you write “thinking poem” instead of just flat out saying something. You use wonderful metaphors. (I think you’re the better writer, out of the two of us) :)

this is cute. and i don't call many things cute.

Interesting, I can only stand in awe at your versatrility and range of inspiration, you come up with so many different ideas and unique concepts - great job.

Awesome work on this!

funny, this had sort of a twisted sense of humour. portraying day and night as characters, opponents. lol kool poem!

1st off, I'd like to thank you soo much for leaving me a wonderful review,totally made me day and also inspired me to post more things here.

This poem is really short, but also, it lets the reader get a view into your soul. Its both deep and almost, for lack of a better word, harsh, with some wording. It's kind of like ee cummings poetry, he wrote a poem called "brIght" (i think) and the paranthesis and the way it's written really remind me of that style of writing.

Thanks again for the reviewLiz :)

awesome piece. i love the personification. great job!

This is a very creative concept...and well -worded. I like your formatting.

very good poem )

Wow, I. Love. This. *clicks to add to faves*

Lime

Wow. There could be so many different meanings behind this poem. I really loved it. Incredible poem.

This is quite lovely. I love all the mixed frases you used.

So much said in so few words. Very intriguing and mystical in a way. Keep up the excellent writings!