|Reviews for mornings|
| les petits bateaux 12/16/05 . chapter 1
Sweet and sensual. I love the imagery here. Endearing.
| not sure yet 10/15/05 . chapter 1
oo, that was very warm feeling, really enjoyed that, muchly beautiful, wonderful job
| Millay Inspired 7/31/05 . chapter 1
Your words "slipping, kissed, caressed, danced" all have a slippery "s" feel to them, and suddenly you throw in the dischordant sound of "infectious"
I'm not sure if that was intentional for emphasis, or if you didn't mean to do that, but the effect needs to grow on me some more.
| Ephemeral Seraphim 6/13/05 . chapter 1
I'm surprised I didn't review this. I was sure that I reviewed this before, but then, with my failing memory, I can't remember anything . But nice job on this one. The first line was effective, and I simply loved it. It's just so happy and bright, and it's a refreshing change from your normally dark and angsty poetry. This poem is simply very beautiful, and I love the way that you portrayed a sunny day on this.
| Frodo 6/9/05 . chapter 1
Simple yet beautifully written. You really have quite a knack for writing poetry. Your work flows well and seems so effortless but ends up sounding so beautiful. Great work. -Micah
| Jazzista 6/7/05 . chapter 1
This is a true work of art! Very beautiful. :)
| Edraith 6/7/05 . chapter 1
This is really beautiful. Captures the moment quite exquisitely, I can almost feel the warmth and light of the sun myself while reading it. Nice job. "infectious grin" is a fitting image, well done indeed. :-)
| Bitch Du Jour 6/5/05 . chapter 1
Sounds like many mornings I had before I fell into the depths of pretty.
| tablesalt 6/3/05 . chapter 1
so short, yet so purely sweet and beautiful. keep on writing.
| Chelsie Anderson AKA Chi-Chi 6/1/05 . chapter 1
Thats deep It flows well and It has alot of metaphors good job
| addie pray 5/30/05 . chapter 1
Super-pretty. Pet peeve: using the same word twice in a poem (sun). I liked this though, flowed well.
| obsidian katana 5/23/05 . chapter 1
beautiful piece. i like the imagery. and once again, good personification. great work. keep it up!
| Unpretentious 5/23/05 . chapter 1
Cute, lovely imagery. Beware the typo demon, however - "pass" "past" and "stretched" has two t's. Nice! )
| Opium Hex 5/22/05 . chapter 1
A lovely poem in it's simplicity.
| Blasphemous Murderer 5/21/05 . chapter 1
It's warming, and sweet. Nice in it's simplicity.