I couldn't bottle up and package just how weak it made me.

AMAZING.

That was cool and really well written.

so delicate, mm...i don't know.

*blink* I hope this is one of those things no one is meant to get, because I didn’t understand it at ALL. I really liked it, because it was beautiful and captivating, but I don’t get it. Oh, well, I still enjoyed it. Good work, keep it up! (*walks off muttering, quite confused*)

wow. It reads like a poem.

That's...neat!I liked it.I seems like thoes things it's not meant for anyone to understand,I think.I liked it.

Wow, fascinating esp. the line with the cut and paste. Really amazing, conveying these infinite senses of loss, love, delusion. ADD to favs.

nicely written. it was a bit confusing, but maybe it was supposed to be that way. whatever though, the writing was good. great imagery!

First...WOAH...monster reviewer that you ar...thank you, so much.

Secondly, theres a book called speak...name change time for mine then, don't want them getting confused...hm..

Thirdly, this is so bautiful, beautiful imagery, especially, the line...

'The line they copy and paste into the air every day.'

In would eat it if it didn't belong to you, and wasn't atually jut made up of little dots on a omputer screen, (it being on somthing ediblre aso helps.)

This will stay with me for a long time...and it opens your eyes...

whew...it was intense...

Brilliant and so haunting. I can't wait to read more of this.

interesting. I like this piece. ti is somewhat surprising and in some way just seems SO real that is scares me. Sad how such things can happen now.. or perhaps it was always so and I didnt notice it. Anyways. I like this piec it made me think. Well done!

beautiful and sad, nicely written...

Remarkable piece of writing- cohesive, expressive, and clever.

very touching and sad story. I like the way you wrote this. The opening was great and so was the ending.

Sorrow

Interesting. I love the surreal quality, really captivating, and the whole Sleeping Beauty spin is very effective. I'm adding this to my favourites.