i really love your poems the flow is just so easy to read...and the visualization you put into your poems...just fantastic...i totally love it!! you have to write more soon!

I like this one...and the way you set it up. Well done!

Wonderful. Love the simplicity in which it's written. Beautiful.

i really like it, it has a special tone to it. and the rhymes are magnificent too, they just add to the poem!

This was a great poem. A great example of the cycle of "love". Keep writing!

nice poem, I like the rhyming pattern and the format. Keep it up!

Great poem. It's nicely written. =) I really enjoyed reading it. Expecially the format. I liked how you did the format.

-Apples

It's an endless cycle, is it not?

*sigh*

Good write!

Lovely stage by stage format!

I like it but deviation from the rhyme scheme in the first and last stanzas takes away from the rhythm of the rhyme. The rest is very nice.

P.S In response to what inspired Youth in Asia, I was moved to write because of the death of Terry Schiavo and people's talk of Euthenasia, etc. Thanks for the review!

wow so organized and meaning full..i liked the way you chose your words haha...and the sentences are so evenly balanced! totally different than mine..

oh and thanks for reviewing my poem!: you're right...it does happen with girls too^^ haha...i'll change it

i liked the rhyming pattern and the repetition of the first line, the whole concept is really interesting.But your last verse kinda felt different from the rest.

::sigh:: lost love can suck, but you made it have a somewhat possitive spin

haha not bad, and thanx for the Review on my poem. Yeah im only 14 but im glad i proved you wrong haah well nice any ways

Wow. I love it. The short lines work really well to tell the story. I love how throughout the poem it shows different emotions. At the end its almost sad. Really good job!