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Lady of Confusion 2008-07-19 ch 29,	abusevery cool and a great story! i cant wait for the next update! SO UPDATE ASAP!
Morte d'Amour 2008-07-02 ch 29,	abuseYay, I'm so glad that you updated! Either it's been too long since I read your writing or you have improved a lot since you last updated because this chapter, although on the short side, was extremely well written! With a good editor to flush out all the minor grammatical errors, this chapter would would so neat and pretty. Pretty in the sense that, don't you just love to look at and admire something that you've written that sounds remotely good? Well, I'm glad we've finally heard from Kya. I figured she would already have assumed that Rhea had been changed since a decent span of time has passed. I hope we get to hear about what she's been doing all this time. Has she been searching for Rhea all this time, or did she lose all hope? Only time will tell, I suppose. Will all hell break loose once she arrives? Haha, well I hope you get to update again soon. Take care until then!
sousie 2008-02-28 ch 28,	abuseupdate soon
Lady Psycho 14 2007-08-22 ch 28, anon.	abuseWow very good I can't wait to read more soon. Please update. :)
Morte d'Amour 2007-08-03 ch 28,	abuseAww, this was a rather cute chapter. Cyrus can act a little impatient and not so nice at times, but he definitely makes up for it. I think Rhea and Cyrus compliment each other very well. Hmm...Draven seems like a very interesting character. I enjoyed reading the scene when they drank each other's blood, and Rhea got to see that memory of her's. I hope we get to learn a little more about her in the future. Also, will we get to see Kir any time soon? This was a really well written chapter. There were many descriptions I enjoyed reading. :)
RyanDrei 2007-07-27 ch 27,	abuseAnd my favorite author strikes again! Glad to see you updated InDravyn!
Morte d'Amour 2007-07-26 ch 27,	abuseHmm, I wonder if I should be worried? Cyrus seemed surprised that Rhea's stuff was still on her horse, but Rhea didn't seem to care at all. Had someone put it there, or was it really just there on him the entire time? Nice chapter overall, much longer and more informative. I do wonder who and how Cyrus's mother is and also if Kir will treat Rhea differently now that she has accepted everything. Possibly, perhaps? Kya has been mentioned in the last two chapters. I wonder if that's a foreshadowing that she'll make a brief appearance soon? That would be interested; I'm not sure what would change between them if they were allowed to see each other again. I am still curious about what Kya has been doing this whole time, but that's at the back of my mind. I'm more interested in Rhea and Cyrus, but she still crosses my mind. I know I can't forget about her. I love it when you describe Cyrus like a panther; it just increases the quality of his look. I suppose that animal is best suited for him. :D Anyways, I'm glad I finally got to catch up with this! I'm lucky that I didn't miss too much, and I'm excited for when you'll update next. Doing a great job!
Morte d'Amour 2007-07-26 ch 26,	abuseYay! I finally have a chance to catch up on these two chapters. I'm definitely not disappointed. This chapter is extremely short, but I was smiling the whole time while reading it. This has to be the first time where Cyrus's adorable side shows. My favorite part had to have been: "His lips curled at the corners in a small smile, it was rather cute." I just think picturing him doing that is so adorable. Haha, he's part elf! That makes him a teeny bit less intimidating and a teeny bit more adorable as well. XD I never would have connected his ears to that fact. Well, there's not much else to say about this chapter. It was a nice, cute little moment between Rhea and Cyrus. I enjoyed it very much!
Extrenm54 2007-07-26 ch 25,	abusesuch an intesne scene with Mikail is wonderflully done and really makes you feel for Rhea is several ways. Im sorry she bit him, but it made sense, she was starving.
Extrenm54 2007-07-26 ch 24,	abuseOk, good chapter. I was kind of confused my the setting in the first part but I got over it. Its nice to see someone that Cyrus is not massively more powerful than. This keeps getting more interesting, and thats why its my favorite story on fictionpress.
Vesta J 2007-07-26 ch 4,	abuseAwesomeness! :) I'm not even sure if you're reading these reviews I'm posting, because I haven't gotten any replies and I realize that you posted this two years ago! I hope my reviews are worth something, this is a good story. -vesta
Vesta J 2007-07-26 ch 3,	abuseNice chapter. You really know where you're going with this, don't you? Of course, this chapter must have been posted a while ago. -vesta
Rebecca Andrews 2007-07-25 ch 27, anon.	abuseThat's the only thing I hate about updates- they end! Aw I wish it went on, I want to meet Cyrus' parents. Poo.
Rebecca Andrews 2007-07-24 ch 26, anon.	abuseI think I'm going to cry because there is no more left to read. Cyrus is such a sweetheart, I wish you'd bring his parents back into the picture because his father seemed so disapproving and I wonder what his mother would think of Rhea. Or Kya, bring her back in. Something. I don't really care what you do as long as you update!
Rebecca Andrews 2007-07-24 ch 25, anon.	abuseLast chapter there was a link to Rhea (or so you said) but nothing was at the bottom of the page, and now there is no link to Cyrus, either! I wish you'd send them.

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