Good stuff...story is really good. Keep writing and believe in urself. U'll be a famous writer soon enough if u put ur mind to it . Keep up the stupendous workk hehehe ).

this story rocks. why dont u update it?

good start, I love this! btw nice title. lol wonder who Johnny is gunna be with or that Retelle guy O.o' is that a real brand? Im confused BAH. ah well at least I understand whats happening so far ' that alone is a miracle XD actually.. nah I usually get stories if theyre interesting- which means this is P hahahaha! -_-' Im rambling. see you tomorrow and UPDATE

hi again. jus lettin u kno this storys realy good so far. i'll keep readin it as long as u keep writin it. btw if u could read some of the new stuff i got on here and tell me wut u think i'd really appreciate it. thnx-cya whenever

That story was like really good i loved it lol...i cant wait to see whats going to happen in their summer in California..you should like become a writer bc u are really good.