It will be awesome if u write a sequel too...I wouldn't mind if u switch it to Jason's p.o.v :)

i think that you should definetly make a sequel -- switching from Jason and Alise isnt a bad idea

If I were Alise, I would've have snapped along with Jason when he got angry at Dan and Alise's mom.

I love the ending -it's perfect! absolutely perfect.

It's cute
It's real
I think I'm going to like it.

nice!

i kinda wish you wrote an epilogue where they end up married with children - that would have been really sweet ;p

I LOVE THIS STORY SEQUEL PLEASE... PLEASE...
BEST STORY.
LOVE ENDING
PLEASE CONTINUE SERIES
THNX AND GREAT STORIE

Loved it. It was adorable, and you managed to cram it all into 11 chapters. As far as a sequel goes, I'd definitely be interested, especially in one in Jason's point of view.

Haha, that was a cute story, even though I was half asleep the whole time I was reading it, I still liked it.

Ooh I do like the ending, particularly the last line. It kinda started with a bet, and now perhaps another bet.

I didn't exactly see Sam and Jack coming, but hey I guess they do make a great couple. Good to know!

I smiled a lot in this fic, I cooed, my heart wrenched, I could feel the vulnerability and pain the characters were feeling- wow, just wow. This was an incredible fic and I'd like to thank you for writing this.

So, thank you!

Keep up the good work and I think I'll check out your other stuff now!

gulistanlik

Thank you Jason! At least one of them is thinking rationally.

Aw! Cute! They're not exactly at a complete truce, but hey, they 'click' as well.

gulistanlik

Oh shit, lemme guess, Jason's won't want him to have anything to do with Alise because she's the daughter of the 'other woman'? Oh great.

Must read on!

gulistanlik

Okay Now I know why Jacks is a bastard.

They may have made a bet, but it was for Jack to get her not Jason. Or there may be no bet at all.

How can someone act that miserable? I mean he seemed so pathetic when he wanted to explain to Alisa the situation. Can't she see that? Obviously not. I guess, sadly enough, I would react the same way to Jack's message if I was in her place. Sighs.

Must read on!

gulistanlik