This is wonderfuel. I like it.

:) I liked it. Keep up the good work

CK

wow, that was well, wow

Diminished love perhaps? Love gone awry, or perhaps a fake love of one night? Such mystery do you cloud my mind with. Invokes alot of good questions. Makes you think.

I love this poem!

PS: thanks for reviewing my stuff! Nothing new lately.

Write on!

Slightly choppy, but I feel that added to the overall effect, rather than subtracted.

Nice job.

~Magnus

Oh, this poem was stunning! So harsh and then so numbly loving. It was wonderful and I can't wait to read more of your writing.

Seems... sort of creepy. Or maybe I've just been watching too much Law and Order SVU.

... Good poem anyway...

...Very interesting. It seems to me it has a slightly... Cynical...? tone. But it's doesn't seem bitter, either. Weird.

I like the way the poem kinda shifts halfway through- it makes this more interesting. =) I can sort of see how the poem goes, and feel the emotions in my mind, and that's good in a poem.

Well-written. =)

:shocked silence:...wow. I'm... impressed. To put it mildly. Incredible imagery. Simply incredible. You are truly gifted.

Um.. wow this is good! I really like the "I hate you, beautiful." that is just somehow perfect. well done!

Nice work, the tone is different and the writing and wording is great.

I love your poems, ** -.- No fair how great you are XP.

Anyway, I love how it's only in one person's POV, how it's all... yum XD. Great.

I wanna write now -.- Told you you make me crave like hell!

-Liar

This is good! Great job!

i dunno... it seems kidna mean...lol, but nicely written