ohh.hey doesn;t sora mean sky in japanese??

Who wouldn't agree to it, with a sum like that? Unless, you could pay that sum yourself in which case you don't need it...That would so be the life...

Just a hint, you might want to proof read your chapters before you post...You always put "defiantly" instead of "definetly"...Actually, I think it's rather funny...Especially since, it could kinda work...Usually...Just try proofreading though...It helps alot...

I'm so glad you updated...Terribly excited...Can't believe you left us with a cliffie like that though...evil author...evil...dang it...now i've got to wait again...neh...:P...stupid smiley...happy smiley with tongue out...why is there no pouty smiley with it's tongue out? seems a lot more useful to me...

Hey there! Me again. Just wanted to start off the new year by letting you know that I still haven't forgotten about you and that I'm still waiting for that update. I will not abandon this story 'til you say you're through. Hope you get the inspiration to update soon.

'Til then...

hello, just wanted to let you know that i am still awaiting an update and that i have NOT forgotten you. hope this will be the inspiration you need to write another chapter...

ohh...temper temper. so cute together though. anyway, interesting where this story is going. intriguing title. might want to use spell check with grammar but nothing too bad.

update soon...

^^ yay, I'm glad you got the 2nd chapter up. Now I see what you mean by the dream you said you were putting in, I get it now ^^ really great story chii, it'll deffinately go far.

^^ Not too bad at all. The dream sequence was a tad confusing, but I'm sure that's what you were aiming for in a sense. It could use a bit of touching up, but that's just a nitpick, and the main storyline, the backbone, is there and thriving. Overall, though, you did good. Keep writing!

O.o;; I agree with Miyakai. Fantastic story. I love the way you write, you're very blunt and up front with your sentences and story plot. There is an air of mystery, but the whole story isn't shrouded in mystery, and mind boggling for the reader. ^_^ The characters are distinctly different, idividuals.

To summeriaze, you're doing all the things I wouldn't do. >

ooh, spiffy. Nice work, I'm anxious to see the rest! Thanks for the review ^.~

-Buffy

Hi! Thanks for reviewing 'Who I Am'! You seem pretty awesome yourself. 'Butterfly' is an awesome song. Have you heard Bumblebee? ^_^ Those songs are so catchy...

WOW. That's all I can say. WOW. I think I have a new favorite story! I LOVE elves. And I LOVE your style of writing. This is definately going into my favorites list. The names are so creative, and I love the storyline. L8r!-Tiff

o_o; I love you. And if you don't realize who this is, I'll kill you. XD; But I love you. You're...you're...brilliant. O_O; You should write books. I'm jealous. XD; I think I'm going to give up on writing if you keep this up! >_>; And that wouldn't be good, seeing as a just started a new story...*sweatdrop*...:gonk: Chii. Suu. Luff-her. Write more. Please. :gonk:

[x].Tori.[x]

i like the detail

Very well written. While the grammar errors are still there, they don't really take from the effect, and you're still left with a good story and plotline. Update soon, I'm waiting for more ^^

hey great chapter :) it makes me wanna read more ^^ my favourite character is kiya so far ^^ update real soon otay ^^