I very much enjoyed it in a depressing way cause I sort of understand what this person is trying to say. It was a little choppy but I think you have something good here and while I was reading it I felt it tugging on my soul. Thank you for reviewing my poem.

very beautiful. i kind of took the last few lines as a metaphor for fights, how no matter how bad things get, your love will always be there to bring you back together again, and it's something that's very personal to me, as i've experienced it one too many times with my one true love.

and then going on a technical note, "It’s warmth and smiles reassure me" should instead be, "Its warmth and smiles reassure me." besides that, a really nice poem, :)

That's beautiful. I can see that it truly is from the heart as your summary says and I can't understand why so few people have reviewed it. It feels like a song, like it almost has a beat to it. This is really good poetry. Keep writing!

Wow, so amazingly sweet and beautiful.

Oh my god... that was awesome!! I would use every positive word in my vocabulary to describe it, but that would take you at least 3 years to read this reveiw, so Im just going to worship you and your poetry and wish i were half as good as oyu... and I'm NOT fishing for complements... if I wanted complements, i would go to Shannon and say one bad thing about myself and sit there for days, hearing her go on and on and on about how gorgeous I am... anyway, i wont waste anymore of your time... THIS WAS SUPERB! hehe, and I spelt it right, too...

Heartfelt and bitter-sweet.