Reviews for Cosmic Strife: Stealing the Torch

Reviews For: Cosmic Strife: Stealing the Torch

MiroFTW 2005-07-27 ch 3,	abuseeh interesting way to finish things off. i think this is the chapter which really changed my view on the entire story. at times, there's a distinction between bad and , and con seemed to cross more into the realm of the latter. sure, i know he's blinded by love and this fanfic was supposed to end in tragedy, but it didn't make me feel for his downfall whatsoever. his blinding love for vina made him not care for anything but revenge, and his stubbornness showed no signs of him listening to anyone else. althought it does show that he's human, i didn't really get that sense of tragic sympathy for him at the end. oh, although i like the way you ended things, but i must point out that it does make a plot hole. i mean after all, con's not supposed to know about his son until during AS, during his team up with jace. overall, i liked the story. my image of con is shaken but it's interesting to see a new mold of his character. this is definitely one of the better fanfics i have read. good work ;D
Master Chief 2005-07-26 ch 3,	abusegoodness! a masterpiece! i love it... i'm almost jealous you can write my characters better than i can myself... :-p... i loved the tie in with everything... it's really awesome man... i mean really good... now get to work on your stuff! M.C>
MiroFTW 2005-07-01 ch 2,	abusemy images of con haven't changed from the first chapter of this book, still think he's the mick rourke with a lust for revenge. i do like how you've developed him with a lust for vengeance. dialogue flowed really smoothy and your first person narrative of con really works well in this story. the introduction of deuce kind of threw me off a bit though. i always imaged him to be some kind of thin guy with a medium build who wielded duel pistols. i keep picturing the punisher with your description. but oh well, to each his own. can't wait for the next chapter
Master Chief 2005-07-01 ch 2,	abuseoh... awesome chapter. i really like the part right before they boarded the cruiser... your dialogue is better than i could've come up with and you seem to capture con's bad-assness well... write more, now M.C.
lucid-psyche 2005-06-29 ch 1,	abuseSo WHY didn't you tell me about this? Serves me right for ignoring the author alerts. Eheh. First off, I have to laugh; you're showing a sensitive side to what MC calls the galaxy's biggest bad-**. There were a few awkward wordings, but whatever. You're doing a good job finding a voice, and keeping it consistent, which tends to be the toughest part. No other criticism, since I have to leave in about 20 minutes.
JaveHarron 2005-05-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseAlright. Cool story. However, I'm interested in this universe. I'll be sure to check out what this is a fanfic of.
MiroFTW 2005-05-09 ch 1,	abuseinteresting side stories. my image of con rafale has changed a bit though, after reading your fic here. he seems a bit like mick rourke from sin city, or however you spell his name. good dialogue, good grammar, too short a story though, but i guess that's why they call it short stories, eh? unless i'm totally wrong and you plan to release more chapters... anyways, this was a good read nonetheless.
Master Chief 2005-05-09 ch 1,	abuse::gets chills:: really good stuff...to say the least... post more! i apologize for the worthless review... M.C.

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