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| C. Regeling 2005-05-19 ch 2,   | YAY for tha new chapter! The uniforms scare me 1. Because of the colour, hun they need to be burned... bad... 2.because i HATE school uniforms, ok i agree that they can be good to help stop cliques forming (but actually it doesnt) but then it also takes away the individuality of the students because they have to wear the same thing. Ben seems like a sweet kid, though like sky i think he's a little too nice... and he's asking her out already? wow I reckon Ben should give her some time, because she's new to this place and (even though he doesnt know) she's trying to adjust to life without her bestfriend. And Sky needs to give been a chance, ok so he's always smiling and he's a little too nice...and shes sworn to despise boys, being the Ice Queen. but still one boy wont change the Ice Queen status...so give him a chance... Update Soon. Jorja : ) P.S the beginning was a great it is what hooks a reader in, a great beginning...so just bcoz it was slightly sad and depressing i'll still keep reading this... |
| C. Regeling 2005-05-09 ch 1, | the first chapter was so sad...but i like it, its a very climatic beginning to what seems to be a rally great story. I really like this, i loved reading this chapter, it did upset me a little to find the one and only friend sky had, had died...but still a great chapter Update Soon. Jorja : ) |