Hey Steph. Haven't heard from you in ages!! Only started re-using my account, so I found this piece, and I must say, muchos excellente!!

Hope university is good for you. Good luck, friend.

X-Ben-x

An interesting little piece. This really gets a message through to the reader, to me, that was that people need to listen to one another and look into anything that could be wrong. I assume that's what you were trying to get across...anyway, nice job.

I like the concept, and particularly the title, but the rhythm and rhyme is off in several places.

*SNIFF* So sad

Interesting notion. The title is very attention-grabbing, but the poem was not what I expected and didn't fully deliver your message. Keep writing!

Wow. That's all I can really say. WOW. Very disturbing piece. Gave me the suhhers, I'm going to have nightmares about Little Johnny tonight.

I like the way it is structurally put together, but the escalation seems kinda out of order to me...

other than that though, good