NEW STORY? Yeah *cheering* Hell this is exciting I already like the start!And I'll be waiting with anticipation for the second chapter.There are going to be more chapters...right!?

GREAT start! *excited already* please continue I'd love to read more.

Nicely written! I like your idea about female samurai and ninja, the plot's interesting. You really should continue this =D!

Small nit -- "then his wait (wail) of pain was cut off brutally"This was a sweet, but too short of a story. If the Samurai could hear the discussion in the halls, so could many others. The deception would only work with better secrecy.The fight scenes were awesome and the dialogs clean yet realistic. I wish that you would have developed the characters more, and shown us the ninja / samurai relationship. To me a little more detail would have really helped this story!

Excellent story! I'm surprised that I'm the only one who's reviewed so far... I just came out with a story too, and no one reviewed mine yet. Chiziru is very cool... ^_^

I look forward to a pt.2!

-Love's Suicide