NEW STORY? Yeah *cheering* Hell this is exciting I already like the start!And I'll be waiting with anticipation for the second are going to be more chapters...right!

GREAT start! *excited already* please continue I'd love to read more.

Nicely written! I like your idea about female samurai and ninja, the plot's interesting. You really should continue this D!

Small nit - "then his wait (wail) of pain was cut off brutally"This was a sweet, but too short of a story. If the Samurai could hear the discussion in the halls, so could many others. The deception would only work with better fight scenes were awesome and the dialogs clean yet realistic. I wish that you would have developed the characters more, and shown us the ninja / samurai relationship. To me a little more detail would have really helped this story!

Excellent story! I'm surprised that I'm the only one who's reviewed so far... I just came out with a story too, and no one reviewed mine yet. Chiziru is very cool... _

I look forward to a pt.2!

-Love's Suicide