That was really, really, really beautiful. I just loved it. it was so... realistic.. i could even imagine myself like that. Good poem. Seriously you are a good writer.
'lol*not quite your usual poem no...*smile*it was cute,is some sort of naive way.I agree that it aint as good as your other ones...but it was cute,so I dunt mind at all*lol*so,you`re 18,ne ne?*lol*poor me..just sixteen*sniffles*and to think that I write the kind of stuff I do*XD*
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