|Reviews for The Oath Of Eternity|
| AllyCred 6/15/05 . chapter 1
recently due to events that have taken place in my life, i wonder does loyalty even mean anything to some friends, i still haven't come up with an answer...this is great, i love the power of ur words...well done. lots of love AllyCred
| Moonjava 6/5/05 . chapter 1
I like this one much better. I can really fell the emotions in this and there is much more of a beat to it.
| KonekOniko 5/18/05 . chapter 1
somehow, the formatting does not do this poem justice. it's not a horrible poem, not at all, it's just, the first two stanzas don't...fit. i don't know whether it's me just tired and critical right now or the poem. not bad though -
| Nobody-n-Particular 5/15/05 . chapter 1
It is rare to have a friend like that.
| Cry Tears of Darkness 5/14/05 . chapter 1
very interesting concept. i dont particularily like this one much tho... sorry. is nice tho
| simpleplan13 5/13/05 . chapter 1
aw very sweet
| Cloud Burst 5/12/05 . chapter 1
very powerful and moving. great work!
| ambiguityy 5/10/05 . chapter 1
The last line made a great impact on me, and the subtle meaning of the third stanza. It leaves the reader wondering where the limits of friendship are. Powerful poem.
| poetic abortion 5/9/05 . chapter 1
*dies* The loyalty displayed in this is breathtaking, I wonder if friendship is really that strong? I mean, I am sure some will go to that length in order to be, or help, one another but I don't think to the extent of Heaven or Hell. *ponders* It may be my lack of experience, it could not. All honesty I don't know, still I think this is well done. Your work is maturing with each poem I see and is becoming more and more beautiful in my eyes. - Well done and continue the good work!
!* Noelle *!
| Rose of Granuaile 5/9/05 . chapter 1
very beautiful. I don't really know what else to say. Wonderfully worded, magnifiscent display of devotion. Brava! Brava! Bravessima!