|Reviews for crushed butterfly wings|
| eden is burning 11/13/05 . chapter 1
That is so gorgeous. nicely done, loved it
| White Tea and Ginger 10/26/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful, delicate, faint. I'm scared to read it again for fear it'll break. I just rhymed :).
I love this. It means so much more than just the words do.
| poetic abortion 8/26/05 . chapter 1
surprise surprise! I've had this on my favorites lists for months and have yet to review.
it is so much like a puzzle reading it and trying to piece together such a scrambled meaning, but either way the interputation could be right or wrong (or neither). this is a gorgeous poem though, the second paragraph I am quite fond of and the ending is just done perfectly. it has this lyrical quality to it that entrances me, each time I read I always finish it and still feel something each and every time.
| lackluster 6/27/05 . chapter 1
hm...it is a puzzle, isn't it? great poem!
| miss lavender 6/19/05 . chapter 1
Seems like there's a problem (possibly romanitc) That this girl is just trying to fix and make work, and she can see some temporary good results, but they never last forever.. It was a touching and beautiful work. Excellent job.
| thank you thoughtful 6/6/05 . chapter 1
i love this piece, especially the character. you've made her into a soft spot of mine, rather well done if i may say.
| this is britt 5/31/05 . chapter 1
soft- it reminded me of The Beatles or Joni Mitchell. really soft and lyrical.
| acrobia 5/26/05 . chapter 1
This is really such a beautiful and elegant piece, the title is so great, and the description itself...it is lovely, I am at lack for words. Keep up the good work!xo - Laura
| sireslayer 5/10/05 . chapter 1
ok... so I'm trying to figure this out. The first paragraph was about butterflies while the second was something like a collage or a quilt and the third went to crushed butterflies or maybe crushed dreams. This is clearly too deep for rhyming was awesome, everything fit. I like it.