Wow...this is good. I like this. You were only half right about the typos, too. There are only a few typos, and they're grammar errors. Other than that...very well put together.

And if you get my e-mail, you'll know that soon enough, I'll post my update.~CDx5~

I don't see any. :) Thats good, though you shouldn't listen to me because I probably drive my beta nuts. -__-;; XDD I loved it, as always I adore your poetry and this is no exceptions. ^__^ You must continue writing, you have a great deal of talent that should be nutured. >=)~ I love it, there are so many lines I wish I could come up with. Brilliance, sheer unadultered brilliance when it comes to one or two lines. ^_^ Great job!

!~* Noelle *~!