well written and personal! excellent, and with fantastic imagery. -the Lady Elaine

"They line them up, down the street to be seenThe prettiest faces, lank, strait and leanBlue eyes, thick lips, ready to kissThey strut their stuff in their bile and **"that bit there is my favorite... beautiful love +favs

Wow..Kait this poem is absolutely amazing! I love it completely and totally!Yay for Kaitlyn *claps*Kat

aww, now you've made me sad and angsty...but i suppose thats the way we all must feel somedays...I blame marvin,he made me all angsty. lol thats not true. Yes it is. NO its no, I love marvin. Marvinity marviny marvin. Marvin mcMarvinson. Marvonity Marv.

Powerful and passionate, I loved it, and the Shakespearian quotes really inhanced the beauty of it. I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.