I would tell you it's witty or funny or what not, but I don't really know what your point was. If man created religion, then it is only a complicated form of narcissism, but would not one be narcissistic to believe that he has all of the answers when indeed he can prove nothing on the issue?

Don't even get me started in our crappy BOE. Unfortunately, colleges now won't accept some students because of the way we've been taught. Nice poem, though. Laters, KD

Amazing. I liked the intellegent design comment. Excellent points and great style!

I feel like I'm just repeating what's already been said, but I wanted to tell you that I loved this. It's witty and well composed. And the run-on sentences and runtogether words are also used well. ;-)

Love it. My family lives in Kansas City, so I especially love the dig. I'm going to be an echo and say that your run-ons are brilliantly placed and conceived, and that I love how the meandering little narrative comes down to such a fine point.

Love this, not sure if it's a poem or just a thought but either way I completly relate and think this piece of writing is great.

aahh, the crazy ways our country works, and all the nutcases who live in it. glad to find someone who thinks they're crazy too!

Loved the run-on words and the question at the end. Loved all of it, actually.

Oh, I like it! The run-on sentences and stuck-together words work wonderfully and add to the whole feel of the piece. Very nice.

rather funny. you have an awesome style and your spin on words was refreshing. I love it!